Lolo_Polo

The bigest problem is that there are too many povs and the progress is slow paced so this makes it boring. Also the mc personality is fuked up which makes him unlikeable.

thats because he is super stupid why did he not use the spear??

This novel has a good start but after a few chapters everything start to happen to fast and its rushed so its get dificul to follow the plot. Also the develoment of the characters is to short.

yeah

when the next??

i think it will be white like the light

woww

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hi