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matther124mthCommentedwhat an unfortunate place to make a typo
Peter roller his eyes. "If you want to learn magic, then bed the Sorcerer Supreme to accept you into Kamar-Taj. Besides, I won't be done for at least another 3 or 4 hours. You won't miss any magic."- matther125mthCommented
her heart was going to beat three times regardless.
'Her heart, beated 3 times which means she's lying, I guess I can't really trust villains.' Doflamingo smirked while at the same time, he was nervous, since this'll be the first time he'll kill someone. - matther121yrCommented
I fully agree with this.
Who needs a map when you have a ride that knows the way. - matther121yrReplied to UnholyFalseHeaven
I actually agree and disagree with you. I was really only trying to give Alex a situation where he could make full use of his wishes without the God figure nerfing him for random reasons. Also I was tired of Bella being a love sick helpless puppy in everything I read. I admit I went a bit overboard. I guess we will both see where it goes.
Ch 2 Birth - matther121yrReplied to Growl_16Ch 4 Phil
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low profile destroyed.
"Seohs deit," I whispered, tying her shoes one to another, making her fall face-first to the mud I had conveniently created minutes earlier, why do you ask? Well, I am a man of preparation, so I prepared in advance in the event of someone bothering me, and the result was magnificent, "Enodnu," I whispered, this time undoing my shoe spell. - matther121yrCommented
The MC just said he was trying to keep a low profile. I give it a chapter before he does something dumb.
"I would if I could," I smirked, "But alas I can't, sad," annoying her had become a newfound hobby of mine, what can I say… she was a bully and I adored messing with bullies, even as a sick kid I annoyed them, which was the reason why her cabin had a been in an unfortunate streak of bad luck since I got here, which was what Chiron said trying to keep the cabins in peace, but in reality it was me, summoning frogs… worms, or burning their clothes…. And as a child of Leto, no one suspected of me, and the never would, I did not want anyone knowing I could use magic, and if my all-mighty siblings hadn't told Chiron, why would I?. - matther122yrCommented
think of all the penguins she just killed.
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He should have put it in orbit around Venus.
" I would have done that but thankfully I couldn't the entire ship was made of some metal which I or any other person with super strength couldn't break, tear, destroy or even make a dent and considering the aliens inside it was the best option" - matther122yrCommented
This seems counterproductive if you are trying to make it look like an accidental death.
I take the pill in my hands and observe his skin melting and then his skeleton melting with even the metal of the car melting and at last when I can't even see a cell of him left intact with my newly acquired microscopic vision I stop providing magic to the fire. - matther122yrCommented
So he just sat there for five hours?
It took my men roughly five hours to arrive at the salt throne, whereby that moment, Balon had already died. - matther122yrCommented
This was entirely Aedan's fault. He casually mentioned that he could feel James coming like it was no big deal, Christian just went along with the flow.
"Sigh. Christian opened his big mouth and Victoria wants to know. Should I?" I explain simply and ask my two friends. - matther122yrCommented
sounds more like a magical fax machine
It took a good amount of testing to find that I could form links between pieces of the same tree or it's offshoots, not only between conjoined trees which are rare. I think the fact that I'm trying to do a much simpler version of the cabinets helped reduce the strain of the bond necessary. My goal is to create a link between a great number of mini cabinets which will act as an instantaneous delivery tool, where you basically write something on paper, put it in, close it and off it goes to the requested receiver. I'm basically inventing magical text messaging in all honesty, but without tech. - matther122yrCommented
Different!
The stakes are on a completely different level. - matther122yrCommented
Different!
BUT..... this time, something is different. - matther122yrCommented
Advice that vague seems like it would do more harm than good.
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