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If he is over extending or leaving himself exposed during his swings, even if it's just during physical conditioning, I would consider that bad technique. Yes proper training would correct that but in the heat of battle he runs the risk of falling back on bad habits, especially the first few times. Muscle memory is real and can get you into trouble. I doubt it will ever be a problem for this character though.
Just once I would like to see the SI/OC walk into Olivanders and be compatible with almost all the wands instead of the one wand so unique that if it's damaged or broken it would be irreplaceable and leave them a squib effectively. This kid has already mastered wandless magic so he would be alright but it would still be inconvenient.
Is this story a translation? The random Senior title being used here and there seem very out of place.
If he is swinging a sword repeatedly with bad technique that will create muscle memory with bad technique. It doesn't matter if he is actually fighting someone. It will carry over and need to be corrected later.
Why do the MCs only ever make half decent choices when they have only 1 wish or 3 wishes? Any other number and it's like they got hit with the stupid stick as a child.
is it dropped now?
drug cartel cash houses would be a better target.
tell that to the other superman
I wasn't sure I would like this because of the stat screens. I would prefer fantasy to stay fantasy, but it seems to be more for the readers than a actual system. As far as anyone else can tell he just adapts and grows crazy fast. This is also one of the better written Eragon stories. Not to mention it has gotten further into the book than most. Eragon not being a sociopath or an overly emotional manchild is also refreshing.
without prior training he is only picking up bad habits with the sword. better to wait for Brom to teach him correctly.