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Cho chang is good with Cedric please don't break them. I hope the Harem not to be large. Keep in 3-5 member maximum. Like Luna, Hermione and I don't know any other than this two for Harem. Maybe Daphne Greengrass. Well only interested into this 3 girls hope author keep in control
Idea is good and i would be best if MC stick to it but I am sure he won't afterall all Author had to put this and that and force a plote in it. It would be very interesting if MC stay far away from them and learn new things as well as have his own adventure like getting Ravenclaw inheritance and making a business empire in both magic and non magic side. Then it would be better story them just taking out orginal story and putting some this and that...
Everything can be said to be good till now. Only hope after the time skip(please have time skip like Naruto) MC becomes matured and think of his own interest and protect his family and his friends only. And build a large force and help his friends to be strong (MC should first use his strength to build his own friends power then share it). Really hoping for better time skip and awaiting for big battle simultaneously working for improvement of the world for his force...
Seriously!! MC doesn't want to hide from SHIELD ?? And this story feel like a new superhero coming out in MARVEL..... I really would love to reed business type as well as build own business empire. Go for politics too then in MCU's time MC can help and also be save.
Reality stone in Knowhere?? Which year is it?? This is comic earth and i didn't read it. I want to know weather the story is similar with MCU movie. Like in comics somewhere tony get kidnapped or join in a war or in teen age he build iron suit to check the company
The last paragraph tell that MC's company did many things. Author should have shown that atleast goes through it like in family metting. I want to see how MC become powerful as well as how he build his influences aka build an empire of business or family.