Ahmed_Sultan_9225

This chapter should be re written he looks like a slave to the living turbinal than living his own life he had the power to save them uhh I Don't know I just don't like it at all

This story is so much fun to read keep it up author looking forward to more chapters

I'm not sure what even happened this was confusing to read

Not really a fan of avatar but I like this one it's so much fun to read please don't stop writing it

Where's the system haven't seen much of it the story is good but the pacing is so slow it's getting a but boring to read

finish this story

Can't wait for more chapters

Keep writing this one I enjoy reading it

Make it a fruit that will allow him to travel to other worlds maybe

Give him whitebeard template from one piece