See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

That’s true, I would love to see a fully unified Rae & Arthur team.

Bit early to say, but I will carry on reading...

I don’t think so, she’ll have even more to hate hIm for.

I agree. Would love to see more comments here. Maybe i should repost my ‘what shall we do with a drunken scholar’ here... (It’s based off Jinotad’s version.)

Ah, so this is the infamous chapter I heard about on Discord... Glad I finally got to read it.

Lie, Arthur, lie. You can do it.

Keep up telling your story, enjoy, and keep learning!

Keep up the story and learning.

Don't worry more chapters will come and will come daily!

Thanks! (I really should find something else to say, but I really do appreciate every comment.)

Thanks.

Thanks! Hope you carry on enjoying the world as it continues to be expanded.

This is a really engaging story that solidly hooked me and drawn me into the world and character's story. The story starts with a slow burn but that just adds to the favour.

Am I the only one who hoped Rae would be a bit nicer?

Thanks for reviewing, WolfsBane. I'll be glad to keep transporting you to the storyworld in the future, so please keep on coming back!

Yeah, loving her more too.

Let me start this review by saying that for the last goodness how long I've been sending this story every stone that I'm able to, that and I'm a privileged reader, and I've even sent the story a gift too. If that doesn't let you know how much I enjoy this story then I don't know what else will. I admit there are a few issues with the story and wish that they get touched upon, but hey that's just a bit of niggles to my overall enjoyment of the story.

A very promising start of an interesting story with an interesting world. Looking forward to seeing the reuniting of, what I am assuming will be, the two main characters.

No, just please no... 😆