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SMH you guys still haven't noticed that in the year he has been there and checked in, He has only got a power up twice, Every other time was weird shit

I give stones, You give more. It is heresy to not have at least 100 chapters with an ff this good. But I understand because they are long and that makes it better. For Terra, the Imperium, the Emperor, and the Fallen.

After reading this multiple times I am making a review. Some have already gone in-depth so I will just say, Read it through if you wish to know answers to questions you might have about the OC. Everything is explained through the story, don't read 10 chapters and think "Wow she keeps changing her mind about what she hates, like or feels". This was written with a character who not only started as a mortal but may have had one of the worst starts they could, only for them to become a Goddess with a huge family and children. Then they die and have to start all over again as a mortal with another bad start. You've all seen old people read or watch something saying they hate it only to then say it's good. The OC is hundreds of thousands of years old if not millions, You can't just start telling her whole life story after she makes one or two comments because then this world be her old life's biography not a story of her new life with flash back to explain things. . . Amazing job author, waiting for updates on her new adventures so I started re-reading, felt after seeing the low IQ comments about how she isn't straight OP right after being birthed and other things I figured I'd leave a review. Keep up the good work ..1231 word review jeez

my dude chill for real

I want more chapters everyday I've been giving both stones to this fanfiction because it's really good especially toward the ending where I'm at right now I like how he slowly starts to show his human and symbiote emotions colliding with each other I would like a little more detail when it comes to the romance parts but I understand from reading it that you are attempting to keep it more "PG".

Yes another shameless review from the author. I would really like to know what those of you who read this novel think of it so that I can attempt to try to cover some of the areas that I might be lacking in. Also i know that the first few chapters might be kinda slow but i will be updating 2-4 chapters a day for the first week or two. Any feed back is great thank you <3

yep basically explains all the emotions anyone would have in that moment

Love the overall character for Elizabeth and how she is a monster that actually acts like a monster. The world is beautiful and vast and just from the 10 or so chapter's I've read so far it is well thought out, PLEASE KEEP IT GOING. <3