ThePharaonicDoc

i love these kinds of stories even tho i know they won't go far but i always like to read the start lol , so anyway based on the first 15 chaps ( that are released so far ) : pros : - lord genre duuh - mc feels kinda real ( gj ) cons : - redundancy ( i mean i would skip the paragraph talking about how amazing his skill is and explaining it for the 2nd or 3rd time but it still annoys me ) - Fast af boiiii ( chillax alittle or you're gonna burn the story ) grey : mc too OP , i mean idk about other races but TOO OP atm but oh well it's the first 15 chaps what do i know

Blessed land this !!! BLESSED LAND THAT IN THE BLESSED LAND TOO MUCH BLESSED LANDS IN ONE SENTENCE !!!!!! Very horrible. the idea is good if only it was translated in a good way

Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! Brilliant, i love it! lol had to make enough characters xD

well, it's the kind of *Simple and enjoyable* novel. So far not much of the world is introduced but the pace is good and no cliches (Chapter 10), Looking forward for the future chapters. Good job author.

Please fix the grammar and punctuation ... all I've read was the first chapter and almost every paragraph has a mistake in it. it leaves a bad first impression so work on that while updating cause i like the idea of the story and I'd like to read more.

Honestly, I'm very annoyed by the info and flashbacks in the middle of the fight, i mean he could think all those while escaping not in the middle of the fight then get surprised by stuff happening x.x

كل سنه و انت طيب يسط xD

Don't stop writing this novel please, Your writing style is good even tho it's not an original but as ur first story i give you 5/5 thumps up man just for the original power up theme

A very interesting concept tbh , but it's weird talking about the past and the present like we already know about his past and it was never mentioned her recarniated or something in the very beginning. + GOD DAMN HE TALKS TO HIMSELF MUCH , SO MUCH INNER MONOLOUGE sheesh. so far i read up to chapter 22 and the way things are going he's like one rank behind the stongest beings ? just without a back up lol

Well , It's fulfilling , The character growth and changes are just amazing , the world is still not so clear until now but so far so good , the writing still is also good which is a relief lol