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actually to be clear I love this book. this review is out of a wish for the book to improve it is not to be taken as a negative review

while I really enjoyed they zones I find that his plot armor is really annoying. like he happens to meet some bigshot that takes a liking to him every time and it gets old. also I get tired of constantly praising him and how cool and sharp he is with his aura or whatever. this is especially aggregious in terrain. the zones make up for these faults they are well written and interesting I just wish plot armor and constantly reminding the audience how hot and cool he is like a fanboy teen was toned down. he doesn't need every woman in his vicinity to get super attracted to him.

This book is okay but it has some quirks. while the characters are interesting they can be really cartoonish. like the "villains" are written as irredeemable people with no self awareness. they don't feel like actual humans. Some of the dialogue can be very edgy like something a middle schooler would write. what's keeping me going is the non-villan characters and world building. the world is interesting and Sophie's relationship to her dad and peirs is fun. Author if you see this read vampire system and when they transform into bloodsuckers. it's similar to Sophi but done in a more "elegant" way . keep up good work

this author just loves cliff hangers kinda stupid to be honest doesn't make me wanna buy more chapters just makes me want to pirate them lol

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okay uh auto correct hates me use and king not us and kind.

okay look story is decent but I have a large problem. the way it's written is really disorienting. take the synopsis the king says " all the other brothers but the youngest brother." rather than " all but the youngest brother" see how the second sentence flows better. also us he or they sometimes. when the kind is being addressed and speaks you don't need to say the king just say he. I am not trying to be a hater I genuinely want this book to succeed and I'm trying to provide constructive criticism.

great novel and it's totally free. no pay wall bs just a very good unique novel. the mc is rational and not an edge lord a hole like 90% of mc thank God. the side characters are funny and we'll written just all around great novel

this book is good at the start, but it begins to get old after chapter 400. The same jokes are used over and over, the plot is generic and the two protags get pretty bland. it's not bad just mediocre after 400 I feel that the characters got blander over time. also r e a n and roan at like 5 year olds which is really annoying and weird.

this book is amateur but not bad. it is unique and new in a very oversaturated market. I would say it's largest problem that almost every fantasy novel struggles with is character motivation. he want to be alive but why. what makes him want to really live. also the book can be slightly confusing sometimes. I will re visit this when the story develops more I would recommend as a decent unique read.

this book took a hard* turn

your ability to type with one hand is pretty impressive

where is the Sunday chaps??

I hope if they become an item the relationship is done well

I have to say that if you ever do develop romance it would be nice to see it have depth. like everything so far has been a gag and that's fine. but if you ever decide to put two characters together don't make the entire relationship a joke. a good relationship can add a whole new side to characters making for some great development.

bro 12000 stones good luck lol

after this arc I really want to see some exploration like the abyss arc was my favorite because we get to see cool new stuff. like imagine they travel to a volcano to get yang energy or something.

the entire population of the U.S is 300 million. the most densely populated city is 75,000 per square mile(larger than kilometers) this city would be 100 thousand per kilometer without sky scrapers just saying