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Devlin_Powers1yrPostedHey everyone! Gotta be a little shameless for this one I guess :) My story is about a man named Domison and his puppy dog as they go through a system apocalypse. But in a world where a system has descended and granted humans the chance to obtain superhuman abilities and powers, Domison is given a chance to be something greater. Unfortunately a great power that is seen as different, is often construed as something evil. I just wanted to thank everyone who has taken the chance to read through my novel. I am doing my best to average about 1 chapter being released every 3 days or so. Any and all support is appreciated! [img=coins]
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Super hype!
"With this, I will rename you from Gaël Skye to Gaël Brand and you will become my will to bring order to this world, you will become a King of King's, a Hero of Heroes, I look forward to watching your growth." - Devlin_Powers1yrCommented
Maybe she regresses to allow him a more solid foundation? That way it plays into the cultivation aspect? Good exposition though!
"My offer to you is to give you a new life. I'll regress your age by a couple of years to give you a better start to train your strength to survive in this world. You will be trained by me personally for a couple of years before you set out for a better start in life. You will also receive my blessing as a limiter on your power. If I were to let you roam around, someone of our blood and talent in our world would be destroyed before we know it." - Devlin_Powers1yrCommented
It might sound a tad bit better as "wariness began to settle across my face then, but" Love the warmth the goddess is portraying so far though!
Wary started to sit in my face but she just smiled ever so calmly. Waiting for my response.