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Hey everyone! Gotta be a little shameless for this one I guess :) My story is about a man named Domison and his puppy dog as they go through a system apocalypse. But in a world where a system has descended and granted humans the chance to obtain superhuman abilities and powers, Domison is given a chance to be something greater. Unfortunately a great power that is seen as different, is often construed as something evil. I just wanted to thank everyone who has taken the chance to read through my novel. I am doing my best to average about 1 chapter being released every 3 days or so. Any and all support is appreciated! [img=coins]
Super hype!
Maybe she regresses to allow him a more solid foundation? That way it plays into the cultivation aspect? Good exposition though!
It might sound a tad bit better as "wariness began to settle across my face then, but" Love the warmth the goddess is portraying so far though!