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Blim_BlueDust

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2021-01-06 JoinedUnited States
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  • Blim_BlueDust2 months ago
    Posted

    wonderful story of love and the value of earned respect and trust.

  • Blim_BlueDust2 months ago
    Posted

    The book has potential. I feel like the first five chapters are a little short in the beginning because of the world building. [img=update] Great job building the suspense. [img=recommend] Could definitely use some more clarity in respect to what circumstances led the MC to be isolated , he had/has friends but doesn't seem to engage with them. He doesn't have a girlfriend, but it doesn't clarify if he did have a girlfriend in the past. What is going on in the graveyard? the current pace with respect to building of the story makes me feel like this book will be a slower advancing book, as advancements of the story will be 30-40 chapters to get through one event. Love the work so far keep going ! [img=More pls]

  • Blim_BlueDust10 months ago
    Posted

    Hopefully the story produces content soon. I will check back later

  • Blim_BlueDusta year ago
    Posted

    I picked this book up hoping it was going to be a brilliant read. trying to read it was a problem for my eyes. Trying to listen to the story was a problem for my ears. The premise of the story could be amazing, it failed in its execution by having such limitations as bad grammar, confusing sentences that merge several ideas. Hope you get an editor because I look forward to reading the story

  • Blim_BlueDusta year ago
    Posted

    this rework of an already popular theme and not an original story there is little value in this story .I was hoping for something interesting, was disappointed .😭

  • Blim_BlueDusta year ago
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

  • Blim_BlueDust2 years ago
    Replied to nadreb

    I love how you brought forward Emma's brilliance as a swordswman with her being able to read emotions and body language. She noticed that he was not feeling the effects of the pain. I wonder what else she will notice, I hope she becomes aware of the other people colluding with Arthur.

  • Blim_BlueDust2 years ago
    Posted

    The opening chapters in this book screams you need to read this adventure. I love the premise of the main character struggling with what defines family, how to keep them safe, how to reconnect with distant family, kith, and kin. The story explores what it means to be responsible for the development and safety of those who trust you. I like that the main character does not follow a cookie cutter prescriptive formula for character development. The mc is forward thinking and reflective about their own way to develop. I am eager to read more material from this author! [img=update]

  • Blim_BlueDust2 years ago
    Posted

    Love the main character and his struggle with circumstances. Looking forward to seeing this book have tons more chapters. The quality of writing makes it worth rereading many times. Definitely need more support from readership [img=update]

  • Blim_BlueDust2 years ago
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair