Honestly, super hyped about this story! Id love a main character who is constantly learning a variety of things

Im so confused by the authors intention to make players this stupid. Is it just to offset their mediocrity to the MC’s greatness?? Because no players spending 5 grand to be the first users would ever act like this. And isnt this in beta still? Like no beta players are this idiotic.

The author seems to struggle with the expressing the correct emotions that people would typically express. Im hoping this improves later on because its frustrating to read paragraph after paragraph of emotional jargon that could be expressed in less than five words. Like saying ‘Old Sword let out a long and restrained sigh before speaking’ this clearly expresses frustration and impatience without all the explanation.

Ahhh, this acknowledgment makes me so happy!! Whenever I’ve tried a sport or athletic activity, I am quick to notice errors in myself and others after learning. But im too dooky at controlling my body so inevitably I make the same errors. Ive spoken with others about this and they lie to themselves about not making the same mistakes. Respect the author making the character self aware and confident enough to know his limitations but not fall because of them

I think its both. Both were suffering terribly but still fighting to survive

I dont think he’s a nightmare creature, maybe a person born in the nightmare world? Or a parent sent him in as a sacrifice? I think it was mainly a betrayal for him to have his soul split

All in all, highly recommend. I never leave reviews because Its usually not worth it. Ive been reading novels daily for over 15 years, both masterpieces with awards and ones from wattpad with no plot whatsoever. I very rarely can FEEL the emotions the author intends to express because they simply do not have the talent to express those feelings through words. HOWEVER, this author has an incredible talent to make you immerse yourself in the world of the novel and completely share emotions with the characters. As an obsessive reader thats grown numb to most writing, its like a drug that I highly recommend you read. The novel isn’t just great at touching your heart, its well written and with a clear plot. No nonsense of ‘why did this suddenly happen’ or the highly frustrating ‘oh, thats plot armor.’ Everything that happens seems realistic and with a purpose. The character growth is steady and realistic. The side characters give you the ick one second and adore them the next paragraph. Its REAL.

I feel like both Radia and Han Joon are not even morally grey, they’re completely black inside but their pride and ego doesn’t allow them to do something against humanity. They are both doing whatever they can with the restoration just for their own benefit. So while they leave a bad taste on the tongue, they are ultimately on the same side as humanity in clearing the miasma. Now, whether they’ll help Zein in escaping the fate of being a vessel to a God, is a whole other story depending on the benefits. Which from what I can see, IS helping Zein

Right?! This author tickles my brain juuusstt right

Its insane how talented the author is to write so well that the tension was palpable! I genuinely felt like I was intruding on something private

Ive read so many novels for over 15 years that for me to get emotional, it means the author has a talent for emotional writing. And by god, this just absolutely decimated me into a puddle of tears. This was devastating and beautiful in the most heartbreaking of ways.

Well… dead bodies do provide an amazing amount of nutrients to plants and forests

I alsojust dropped it on chapter 86. A lot of the story just feels redundant

… love make authors thinking women in a society where strength is key would want to enlarge their breasts. I can assure they would not, t-ts are inconvenient as hell. The bigger they are the more annoying

Author, to better describe this aspect of the character you should take advantage of the narrator point of view to express how the instructor (a very skilled person allegedly) noticing how his body’s center of gravity if steady and his posture leaves no openings even if appearing lazy. Being this direct turns readers off just like in s-x. You dont say ‘i am pushing my hips into this hole and then use different muscles to pull out’ as youre doing something, its something that needs to be alluded to

This character does feel realistic. I mean thatin that even the author doesnt understand his own protagonist so they just add these weird actions and attitudes that arent realistic at all in an attempt to find what feels right for the protagonist

This dialogue is kinda…. Stiff. I feellike this doesnt flow fluidly and half the conversation is being kept in the authors head. Hopefully it improves later

Its refreshing to see!

Yeah, he’s also SA’ed and r*ped as a child. Its brought up much later on but his childhood is horrific and glossed over tbh. He is tricked by his r*pist adoptive family’s previous toy into murdering those parents and feels massive guilt and this is skimmed over

This has to be one of the most underrated lines in a webnovel