DonMarkinson

Why would he brag about his father getting him the Pokémon to his own dad? That part didn’t make sense

Shouldn’t he have earned 50 million poke coins? 500,000 from the bounties and add his 100x multiplier would give him 50 million. Plus the 21 million, would give him 71 million all together. Also how did he spend 10 million out in the wild? Or did it cost him 10 million just to go train for a few hours at that gym after qualifying?

This is the only Kayleigh I care about

I thought it was a 3 month art scholarship? In the last chapter he was 3 going on 4. Now he is 4 going on 5.

Thanks for the chapter! Great chapter, like the way you show that Batman has a vulnerable side too!

Since you said no Jade, then Cat or Tori would be a good fit for him which ever way you choose.

August Rush doesn’t get a whole lotta love as a movie but it’s a pretty good movie in my opinion!

Tv show on Netflix

Man you have been killing it with these last few stories you written! Keep up the good work! I know this has nothing to do with this story but ever thought about writing an umbrella academy story? I found one that was decent in my opinion but they just stopped writing it.

Awesome story so far! Keep up the good work like always!