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Not entirely, no. I won't spoil the overall plan he has, but something that has been hinted at for a while is the lack of involvement 'The Father' has with reality and how unnerving it is that he is getting involved now. So, it wouldn't really make sense to say he would ever want to 'retire' from his job, because 1) He is omnipotent, there would never be a struggle with his job anyway and 2) he doesn't really have an inherent job. If you wanted to theorize, the least spoiler hint I could give is that the father isn't retiring from his job, but he is giving Ray A job.
Interestingly, this kinda makes sense. if our world ALWAYS has super powers, tech would slow down. but if we already got used to having advanced tech even if we could then have super powers, we wouldn't halt our production or advancement because we already got used to having it. and in the story, the humans stopped fighting, so they would have even more time to focus on tech.
"Yo we got powers now, so let's stop fighting, this stuff is dope!" Ngl while it may be a bit unrealistic, I love that so much XD
Sorry, I was tired while writing this because I have been quite busy, I will fix it now. It was meant to be Deron.
For a multitude of reasons, but the best way to explain this would be to look at the namesakes of each nation, which are gods. The gods act as patrons for their nations so within these countries, Demigods who are attached to the patron god receive a large amount of praise, but if you are a demigod not of the patron god, your status is often unaffected. After all, it could be seen as insulting to the patron deity if you hold the child of another god in high regard, and outside of this, all being a demigod really means is that you are more powerful/stronger than other humans by a decent margin. So from a war standpoint, his best use would still be on the frontlines. For a comparison a magical sword would have the same function as a regular sword, it would just be more useful.
Well, that was very blunt XD. I can't blame you for having that opinion, but I can promise you that I wasn't trying to be lazy. This was a year ago when I had just begun writing, I am trying my best to find my footing, and I'd like to believe I improved as time went on. hopefully, the beginning of my next novel will be better, but I am not really ashamed of how this one started either. I mean, we all start somewhere, right?
He has an important job to do. Someone's gotta transport these characters XD. For those who are actually curious, while I assume most have probably pieced it together, the truck was sent specifically to kill them in a way that wouldn't be supernatural to any on-lookers.
He multi-tasked XD. I understand the confusion though. I won't lie, I almost autocorrected it several times in my mind to Eric.
In a way, I can understand, especially with Chaos. But when it comes to Veris, his reasons will be explained further as the story progresses. While it doesn't excuse his actions, I believe that to some extent it is understandable. As for Chaos, his motives are designed to not make sense from a purely human perspective. But if you were to look at it from the point of view of a being so far above humanity and whose very nature is chaos it makes a bit more sense. In his eyes, his actions mean nothing as killing humans would be the same as us crushing an insect. With Veris, a being who was once human, his motives were meant to be the end he wants justifying his actions. Whereas with Chaos, a being who has only ever existed at the pinnacle, it is meant to be that he never needed justification. Hopefully, this makes sense. You may not like it, but I think it makes sense from the backstory of both of these characters and if you think about it in another way, many people act like Chaos if you scale it far down to a more human level. Because he is inherently just rebelling, which many of us have done, especially when a parent was either absent or we resented them. I'm not saying you are wrong to have your opinion, I guess I'll just need to work on these narrative points a bit better! I am still learning how to be a good writer, so please bear with me. Regardless, thank you for your feedback, your support is greatly appreciated!