As the author I have obvious high expectations for the fanfiction, that explains the five star review. The story is about an outcast of the Otsutsuki Clan, one who was born without their talent and genius.

If I do drop I will tell you, Although Im not planning to do so

That makes sense

This fanfic is based on one of my favourite novels called 'Reincarnation Paradise" check it out of you want its very good. There will be some similarities but I do want to slowly make it into my own story.

Feel what?

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How about a wolf?

Could you please leave some spaces between paragraphs?

This made me think of Kung Fu Panda, you know the quote "Our fight will be legendary"🤣🤣😅

I know its just that, chest compressions sound less dramatic and intense than defibrillators in this case. Thats all, although you are completely right normally you should do chest compressions. I actually watched doctor Mike so when I wrote the first chapter I was like "Im I a traitor"🤣🤣😅 considering he literally has t shirts with the slogan 'Chest Compressions, Chest Compressions'

I dont know why but when I read your comment I wheezed. Your probably not wrong though, who knows though I might change plans

As the author I obviously have a great opinion about this fanfiction. I chose demon slayer because its one of my favourite anime just because of different it is from others and how it stood out. First of all, there's no such thing as energy here like Chakra, Nen or Ki just simple breathing techniques and movement of the swords.

Good Idea I'll change it to Bob Uchiha🤣🤣

I did read that once it was pretty good, I actually based the cultivation levels on King Of Gods and Against The Gods. You should try then out if you are interested

As the author I have high hopes for this novel, just so you know I have inspiration from some of my favourite novels such King Of Gods, Against The Gods and others. You should check them out if you want to, they are both great. In the beginning, it might seem very similar to the novel I was speaking about, but later on it will change

Hey if possible could you also read my new novel that I just started. Just read it if you want and tell me if you have any improvements I could make or pointers I could use. Just click on my profile and head to original works Thanks