BlackDawn

As the author I have obvious high expectations for the fanfiction, that explains the five star review. The story is about an outcast of the Otsutsuki Clan, one who was born without their talent and genius.

If I do drop I will tell you, Although Im not planning to do so

That makes sense

This fanfic is based on one of my favourite novels called 'Reincarnation Paradise" check it out of you want its very good. There will be some similarities but I do want to slowly make it into my own story.

Feel what?

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How about a wolf?

Could you please leave some spaces between paragraphs?

This made me think of Kung Fu Panda, you know the quote "Our fight will be legendary"🤣🤣😅

I know its just that, chest compressions sound less dramatic and intense than defibrillators in this case. Thats all, although you are completely right normally you should do chest compressions. I actually watched doctor Mike so when I wrote the first chapter I was like "Im I a traitor"🤣🤣😅 considering he literally has t shirts with the slogan 'Chest Compressions, Chest Compressions'