Plot twist, I never said I wasn't.

I don't really agree with your logic bro. Females will get married and have kids with the one they love. that's the nature of life. And this is another timeline. There are so many different possibilities that can happen in life. Minato could have been rivals instead of couples with kushina. Kushina might be the hokage. Who knows what happens in all these parallel worlds... Are you gonna stop just because of that? I mean how many fanfic MCs have you seen flirting with a kid Hinata? I see nobody complaining, Hinata married naruto and have boruto and Himawari, didn't she? What about Ino? It's all the same.

You pretty much complained without really giving a valid reason and left. How are we supposed to react?

I was considering not going to college. Now I'm back. I want that Ph.D.

Why would you help a retard who went full denial after he realised that his step mum was protecting him and her daughters even when she herself is being blackmailed? The guy is a symbol of beta Cucked MCs.

Although the fanfic only has 16 chapters, I'm already feeling like it's been quite a journey since MC transferred his memory to his past self. I didn't really see any grammar mistakes throughout the story. The actions of the characters are well justified albeit there are some plot holes visible. I'll still give this 5 stars since it's a unique story that will obviously be attractive to readers who like stereotype villain MCs.

Really good. I don't really know how to describe it since there's no such outlier in this whole fanfic. Characters have appropriate personalities. Writing quality is rough for a few chapters but smoothens out around chapter 7. Hiruzen is an actual good guy who's willing to protect innocents rather than a good old manipulator. Danzo is as usual. Minato was sidelined after the first few chapters since the show is about MC, not him. He's just there to follow MC like a sidekick in future chapters. All in all, a nice naruto fanfic with average potential to be in rank 10. Readers should read it casually not minding the mistakes since the author is still on his craft lol. I'll give it 5 stars to show my support.

Now I can see why her foot is called heavenly.

Canon Hiruzen definitely wouldn't say this but this version can.

my my... you have a good sense of taste brother.

It's a compliment author. Don't take it as a complaint.

Author, you forgot to change "You" to "I"

I mean come on. Would you let go of your waifu if she actually exists and is single? Remember that kushina doesn't belong to Minato. She's a real person. Love is war. Whoever gets her heart first is the victor.

Here's an advice. You can use it here or in your new fanfics or novels. Don't use the same cliche style as others do. It's not that readers hate MC being lazy for the most part. It's about when he became determined. Usually, because someone he loves gets injured or died. Sometimes because he was defeated by someone who actually works hard. All of these are cliche moments used by authors. I can give more but you get the point. Readers would rather read serious MC who works hard because the world of Naruto is dangerous and people can die before they even realize it. IF you want your MC to get serious, how about making him realise after talking with minato? Minato is very mature for a child. His parents are dead and there's an actual reason why he wants to become stronger.

Naruto to MC be like: Da da?

Don't call me dude. I know what you lots like to do. Complaining in fanfics because you can't talk back to your parents in real life or no pocket money. Make some effort at least in your complaints. Don't get all cranky just because I pointed your mistake. Learn from it. Stop giving stupid excuses.

Yep. Actually, Itachi has something much stronger than protagonist halo...

Then why are you still reading until now? Hoping for MC to miraculously die? Dumba*s...

I would be okay with him helping people who are 'good'(to him). We should all go by a golden rule. "Be like a mirror."

From what I read, It's not really that bad as a fanfiction novel. Pretty funny at first but I dropped cause my patience ran out seeing MC acting like women are toys. I'm not some simp who's worshipping women but I just didn't like the way he's acting. Also, the guy keeps ignoring a girl who has a crush on him because it's INTERESTING. The author said MC is not evil but I don't see it. He could have just rejected her straight and done with it or take her in the harem but no. He's just acting like a stupid mother*cker who's annoyed of beautiful girls liking him. In conclusion, If any of you like a protagonist who acts like issei but in reality just a crazy jerk. This is your novel. Also warning, MC likes to get beaten by his women. He got that fetish from his parents who beat him up when he was young. Well, he's not that bad. The guy's supporting a sister who doesn't like him because he killed people who were trying to r*pe her.