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the dub for mars of destruction was so funny, its just 4 dudes having fun
This is pretty good. Although inspired by another fanfic, its actually pretty different from its origin. The system used is different, the characters that appear are different, everything is unique to its origin. Personally, I think the plot is a lot more interesting. I also think you got the personalities of each character correctly. I like how you introduced Ned and the other characters and how it aligns to their respective personalities. I'm not experienced at reviewing so that's all I can really tell you. The story is pretty interesting so just keep up the good work!
bruh, who drops a fic just cause updates are slow, I have a fic in my library that hasn't been updated for 1 year, and I still expect a chapter fron it
oh, right, this is a fic
filipino?
nah dude, the name's Alex
noice
rong is rong
I feel so much more grief in stepping on my dog's tail than stabbing an innocent man