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Hello author a very good story. The character design and world-building was very good. The story had various elements romance,mystery,action,adventure etc. I liked the character of Sarah. Hope you continue the good work and keep writing more books. P.S: However i have a few points that i would like to point out - It was too long and had too many characters, which led to fillers and made the story slice-of-life( not my favorite genre) - Many cliched plot devices were used repeatedly even after 1000 chapters. (aphrodisiac, all the men having an infatuated female working around them etc.) -Lastly i didn't like the character development of Aiden(my favourite). Initially Aiden and Sarah were a power couple but as the story progressed his character faded and he became a yes man to Sarah. He became like her subordinate and lost the charm he had in the first 300 chapters. Infact the other 2 males also became dull as the story progressed. -the ending was a bit anticlimactic If not for these issues i would have rated it a 5.

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Thank you for the beautiful review. Hope you continue to read and support the novel.

Nice novel author...the flow and pacing are good... it's different from the usual Cold ML CEO and weak FL. I appreciate the strong FL. However, the ML is a little bland. The rest is fine. Also, I didn't like the fact that FL liked the ML because of his kid.

NIce development so far....

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Very nice story author..... loved the strong characters of both the ML and the FL.... The plot progression was also nicely paced and interesting....... Thank you for the story PS : Kindly checkout my first webnovel on this site itself: "Beloved of Perfection" I welcome all comments and suggestions.