yes, since I go to school, my primary focus is currently not on my books. Doesn't help that this book is a mess in many areas. And since I don't keep information written down, picking this up will take a LOT of time, since I have to go through all chapters and read up on what I wrote.

hitatus, sorry

Now, saw this comment today and decided to finally get the stick out my ... sorry for the long wait :)

jantyr isn't capable of doing things outside his domain, so he can't per say do that. But, he does have a way to mesure his own energy.

yeah, young me = Lazy, in some areas, lol. Try out my other book, the deity if you struggle with early chapters in this one.

So you’re not stupid

No, I make it confusing, and don’t explain anything, because we’re experiencing everything from Jasmine’s pov and she’s confused :)

jasmine is living through the memory of other beings. She's being shown the evil people on her world is capable of.

Yes, later on Ragnar will be the only pov. But in the early chapters it's more about how everyone grows and not just Ragnar :)

No, the sky's the limit :)

Ragnar is a merge between the two, all in all there are three Ragnar and the main character as we know him is a combination of the other two :)

Thanks :)

today, sorry to keep you waiting :(

thanks for the review, glad you liked this one more. Reincarnated as a god of water was a pet project to improve my writing that sucked :) My next novel, which will be realeasing when Reincarnated as a god of water is done, will kind of have gods, or something similar to them be on the same plane. Can't say much more :) Have a great day and hope to see you in the comments again :)

I do that nowadays, but back then the thought didn't even occurr to me :)

Lol, I’ll fix it.

Well, yeah, the power system might seem lame and lackluster in the begining, I can admit that, but in the end, it was for future development. As for the thoughts on my characters; I can somewhat agree with you! I started writing this story almost a year ago, when I was sixteen, while english wasn't my major language, so my writing was very bad in the early chapters in the story. but back to point, to put it simply, I was bad at descriptions in the begining and found it hard to remember my characters appearance and since they were going to change later on, I ignored it in the begining, no defence there :( In the end the arc you read, volume two was a side story and most of the characters would be gone a bit later, that's also why it might seem, or feel rushed. Thanks for the review, have a great day :)

sí, oce Jantyr ha alcanzado 8000 de energía, le devolveremos más :)

Can’t really say much, since spoilers, buuuuuut, I’m going a bit to fast in the beginning. Not at the level you think though 🥲

I really don't remember 😬