Thank you for reading

Or do you think first person would be better?🤔

Will do! I actually used to write in past tense but I ended up writing a first person story and used present tense. I guess that present tense stuck with me.

Thanks!

Lucy

Silver

Trust me, she isnt

Well this is my own take on the story(even though I pretty much abandoned the story lol) so I did create other conflicts and such within it. Fun fact, I actually didn’t watch all of arcane at all. Nor do I know anything about league of legends😂I saw like the first 3 episodes of the show, and wanted to add some stuff of my own

He wasn’t really supposed to be unique. His character was originally supposed to replicate a normal kid who was brought into crazy scenarios. Since this is one of my first stories, I didn’t write everything as good as I wanted, but thanks for reading it anyways!

Lowkey making me want to continue it. We’ll see

I haven’t even thought about the story in awhile to be honest with you. This is one of my first stories that I’v ever written so I do expect there to be some serious issues with it. I can say, as for Lucy, her importance becomes a lot more prominent as the story continues(whenever I feel like continuing it😂). As you know she’ a mage and everything but yeah. The loose screws was an attempt to show how much negativity Jinx/Powder was surrounded by all these years just to make it a little bit different than the story. With killing Mylo again, I tried to give Silver mainly a difference perspective. As in he believe he’s the reason Mylo was killed when they were kids(which he wasn’t) then when given the chance to start over with the people he loves, Mylo ends up dying again. I tried to add pain to the character but a different type of pain each time. Going from “oh my god I got my friend killed” to “oh my god, I did it for real this time and I really haven’t grown at all” which I think can add development in some way. I’ll be honest, I sometimes have a hard time keeping track of all of the characters which is why Lucy and Ekko are out for some of the time but that’ just on me. I appreciate the feedback, normally it’ just people bashing it without actually supplying constructive criticism in a somewhat positive light.

Thanks for reading

I never watched that music video but I don’t really see that? His hair is different, jawline, eyes, etc are different. Main similarities are skin tone

18*

Lucy looks more like this. Her skin is only a tiny bit pale. She doesn’t just wear a bra, it’ just the most accurate picture I could find that looks similar to her. She often wears a brown skirt, matched with a yellow and brown cropped jacket that has big sleeves. And a plain white shirt underneath. Also white thigh highs and brown shoes.

Imagine that sword as his baseball bat instead, and he often wears a black or red hoodie matched with the red and orange bandanna that’s supposed to look like fire.

Ahhh okay well Silver is black. He looks more like Ekko than anything. I looked on Pinterest and I found some pictures that looks similar to them. Keep in mind Silver would look a tinyyyy bit older at 17 and his hair would be in nappy fro type of style. Lucy on the other hand isn’t blonde, her hair at this time is caramel brown that goes red at the tips. And her eyes are hazel

No lie…you might be on to something😶

I’ll be homest, I’m not an artist so if I drew them It wouldn’t be a good representation of how they actually look. This isn’t anything professional either, I write these right in my bed😂buuut if you know how I could get pictures for them any type of way then I’d appreciate that👍🏽