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Title is now: Gaia's little Gamer

Going for Gru style built in weapon i see

Very nice story so far. Needs a bit of characterization, but it is still only chapter 4, so not a real problem at the moment. Keep up the good work.

After further reading, I retract my statement. This is very in character for him.

A bit strange on how he didn't use mind reading in the first place, or just kidnap someone after they refused him. Less chance of being exposed, more effective info gathering and a chance to examine any differences that people may have gone through in the time he was gone

Standard olympic sized one. (50m length, 2-3 m depth, 25m width)

Bet : 1) Some species of sharks have a spiracle that allows them to pull water into their respiratory system while at rest. Most sharks have to keep swimming to pump water over their gills 2) Everything in the universe is either a potato or not a potato. 3) Today, your body is almost completely composed of different atoms than it was a year ago. 4) If bees were paid minimum wage for their labor, a jar of honey would cost $182,000. 5) During your lifetime, you will produce enough saliva to fill two swimming pools. My work here is done

Nice chapter, keep it up homie

It's the spirit of the matter that counts.

Very well written, nice pacing for my tastes. As of chapter 8, everything looks good and I am anticipating further releases to see where this story goes.

I would think that it should be described as spatial sense/manipulation that is interpreted through sight. That would fit with the common '1 quirk' theory

Behold! The Hot Crazy Scale!

I think that you are interpreting it the wrong way. I think that when he says he 'sees' at the sub-atomic level, he is not really seeing using photon deflections, but more using some sort of quantum entanglement phenomenon, permitting him to have FTL data transfer to his brain using a mutation located in his eyes, but that causes it's own problems, like would his brain process the data at FTL speeds? If so, then his brain must be radically different that a normal one. This leads to the questions about the rest of his body, are his nerves the same, or are they also a product of the Quantum phenomena that allows him to see sub-atomic particles? Can he see photons as separate particles, or can he see them as light? Or both? Assuming that his nerves act in the same way that I said his brain might, then the regular human nervous system would be obsolete, but are they removed or are the nerves still present for 'decorative' purposes. How would such a nervous system work? Maybe using 'nodes' in every cell, eventually having a sort of blanket that reacts in the same way as nerves would, only faster? This would boost his reaction time immensely. That would bring up another question: Would his nervous system/brain be affected by outside observation the same way that other particles would (via Wave-Particle Duality). If so, then that is a glaring weakness, making others able to restrict his power just by setting up some sensors around him. If I am wrong about something, let me know, thx.

Its not necrophelia if they haven't gone through rigor mortis

I swear it's just a reflex test. Perfectly normal

So it goes like 100 -> 50 -> 25 -> 12.5 etc., Getting progressively weaker each time?

*Zeus chapter flashback*

Green hair, cutting himself with something on his face, it seems to indicate him to being human, or at least not the typical kind