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Title is now: Gaia's little Gamer
Going for Gru style built in weapon i see
Very nice story so far. Needs a bit of characterization, but it is still only chapter 4, so not a real problem at the moment. Keep up the good work.
After further reading, I retract my statement. This is very in character for him.
A bit strange on how he didn't use mind reading in the first place, or just kidnap someone after they refused him. Less chance of being exposed, more effective info gathering and a chance to examine any differences that people may have gone through in the time he was gone
Standard olympic sized one. (50m length, 2-3 m depth, 25m width)
Bet : 1) Some species of sharks have a spiracle that allows them to pull water into their respiratory system while at rest. Most sharks have to keep swimming to pump water over their gills 2) Everything in the universe is either a potato or not a potato. 3) Today, your body is almost completely composed of different atoms than it was a year ago. 4) If bees were paid minimum wage for their labor, a jar of honey would cost $182,000. 5) During your lifetime, you will produce enough saliva to fill two swimming pools. My work here is done
Nice chapter, keep it up homie