Pan_the_writer

Yeah, been thinking of reediting that part, thanks for giving it a read and telling me your honest opinion

Thanks, I'll take note of that

wonder where this is going?

what's there to see?

This guy walked up a flight of stairs for ten minutes? I would have turned back after 3 minutes

This is how you know, things are going to get messy

First off, I think its crazy that you reviewed my book before me, crazy good and Second I will proofread it, I may have been writing some of it half asleep

Its a really good book with a good storyline and character development but I may be biased cause its my book. Take a peak and decide for yourself, Don't really like spoilers but what i will tell you is that I do not plan on having a main character with a super hero complex

i feel kind of sad for Arthur, really hoping his life turns around from here

Wonder if he will grow a spine