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Not sure about lightning as catalyst, though.
The cat's head. The bullet that should have stopped, still hits the target... "...the cat remains both alive and dead..." Schrödinger?...
"And that's how I found your father"
Fun thing: Penguins can jump 9 feet high
Zelretch you old vampire... How did you get in original novel?!
Can't you dump some monster corpses IN the worm?
Tsubame Gaeshi
I think you should stop at one element. Don't give him all elements Maybe one more, but not all of them, that's for sure. And if you do want him to have at least 2 elements, then I think that the next elements he need to obtain is electro or ice elements if you want him to be pure DD Or give him Geo element if you want him to be balanced warrior(ATK is on par with DEF) Electro and Ice elements to infuse his Water shark and Geo element for something akin to a turtle (sharks-ocean-turtle) (I just was writing 10 minutes of text about "Why should you leave only one element" but then accidentally hit the f5 and all the text vanishes... Kill me please:_) )
Captain Price?
Nice. Keep going. Tran. Quality - Overall good, but has some mistakes. Updating Stability - You Just started your story so I can't say anything about it. Story Development - Not too fast, not too slow. I like it. Character design - Although we only seen Bennet and our Mc it's still good. (don't add romantic if you didn't ever wrote it or if you don't feel like you can do it properly, pls) World Background - You kinda just put him in already existing world so yeah...
Soooo... I was thinking about this a lot... Will this have some weight in book? I'm talking about Illya part. Why not Irisviel? Or Miyu? Will this be some kind of a turning point in the story?
If I don't have any color blindness than I'll say that his eyes are Amber colored.
Poor ancestor lost his name because of you...