mick_Gared

This is nice. The novel is great. It shows you did your research before making it

please continue the storyline from chapter 20... I can't relate it with chapter 22. from beetle fight to humanoid form?

How did we get here? From the beetle fight, to have comrades and fighting with an imaginary dragon?

Hey. Your book has tags such as #R18, and #Harem. But from the reviews, I don't think there are any.

Nice plot. Good Character development. Having read to the last updated chapter, I'm invested in this story. I've also read other reviews, and wanted to know if that was the reason why you left the Magic System, and changed the entire genre of the story. What happened to his friends, and other alt characters?

I was wondering about it. From having a magic system, to Celestial Ore, to Sword fighting to Magi... It all gets a bit confusing at the end. And I've reached the most recent uploaded chapter. Also, the way the author discards anyone that isn't the MC is alarming. I won't say more than this for fear of spoilers.

remember that she was once a man, so if there were men in her harem, it'd be weird for her.