ScytherOfMw3

I thought you might be Australian given some of the speech patterns but I wasn't sure until the conversion now

I like the start to the chapter is relatable kind of hard to feed a water tame to a troodon though

There's been a few as a ark player happy to see it

Overall was a near professionally done story some aspects felt exaggerated and unrealistic but isn't that what makes something fiction at the end of the day, I thoroughly enjoyed it and couldn't stop reading until I finished it

You broke the 3rd wall

Hope u don’t give up on it again. Last one was pretty good from as far as I remember it was unique for sure

Just gonna warn regarding death mage it is very fd up and depressing 10/10 would not read start again it’s got most “dark” things u can think of and one of the worst things is he’s basically being continuously cycled. But yeah if u exclude all that it is a great book got a bit of everything mainly focussed on country building and mc getting op as fk.

This is good so far I have saved it for when u add more chspters

You have forgotten about time a lot of authors give up books cause of work/sleep schedules not giving them enough time to be productive. Part of why some have slower update rates shouldn’t really complain about that they probably put most their free time into writing it / researching and the quality doesn’t usually drop just less often uploads

Good so far