KingKog

truly

.... Goddamn.... that put a tear in my eye

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Writing this having finished up to the latest chapter. Story wise it's phenomenal. Having finished this in a day ( Don't judge me ) and being someone who actually quite despises the Twilight movies... This was a surprisingly entertaining shift, I took a leap into it because why not? But before I digress - I noticed some hiccups in grammar spelling and the like in the early chapters, but as I continued with the fic, I noticed a clear improvement to having only slight issues, which to me is phenomenal! So if you are starting this, just know those minor errors don't linger for long, and it shouldn't deter you from continuing on! Character wise, I see many people talking about lack of ambition, but I don't quite think they grasp how much our MC has actually accomplished, having visited most of the world, created the grandest creation in Rome, owning what can probably amount three quarter (3/4) of the worlds current money - It is quite difficult to gave ambition when there is no beed for it, with money alone he could rule the world. But some bad points - Slow release, chapters are average in length, not really meaty, nor small - But that in of itself isn't the issue , the issue stems from the lack of release, 1 chapter a week is quite slow, but I won't blame that on the Author, real life comes before a Fanfic, which is why I would war new readers that, although great, you will need some patience for this fic. All and all, phenomenal work, great premise, fun read, and most of all... Julius is best bro.

Honestly, great premise, entertaining to a degree, but - Allow me to get critical. The book throws it into your face that he's the MC, what does that mean? well, it reads like a Chinese cultivation novel, all the women only stare at him, always... And when in the different cinematics it feels like all other characters have been dumbed down to trashy levels to make the MC shine. Writing wise... While reading I have been torn between thinking the writer is non Native English, down to thinking this was a well translated Chinese novel. Regardless , it reads well, but dialogue flows forcefully, eg: Most of the time when any character speaks, it is about how great/mighty/sexy our MC is. Overall, I'd rather this novel a 3. I am, however going to rate lower due to the fact that I see almost no non-5 star reviews , which makes me believe the author deletes those.

Nahh, MC doesn't reincarnate into an Animal. I believe they are referring to the fact that the MC isn't a b!tch, he is very much a "f*ck around and find out" kinda guy.

haven't even read it, but shhhhhiiii... My ninja, finally... a black MC that isn't bullied or some sh!t. You got my love right off the bat.