Come on we are waiting

I’m in the navy and the description of him getting off the bus and the entire process is super accurate. I can tell u wear/are in the marines.

Izo would be the best choice. Mastering one is always better then being good with many.

The detail that goes in to the story is incredible. It’s keeps you on your feet and just wanting more.

This story is even better than your other Harry Potter story If I didn’t use all my stones on it I would have used it on this one

This is really good I’m impressed

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The grammar is well done and it’s a great story I just wish the chapters were a little long, it’s only chapter 5 at this point in time so I understand the need to provide more characters so people will not just just skim past it. But besides that it’s a well written story so far. And I can’t wait for more.

What makes me mad is that it’s a bit true not completely it’s a bit biased

The bishop is my favorite

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Please give me more

I love your stories ignore the haters

Your good have a peaceful day.

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