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DC_Butternut12dCommentedI was outfitted in a white shirt and white pants. House Veridian was known for their white clothes and hair.- DC_Butternut12dCommented
so the planet is basically a dry land?
2 Trade routes: Rimma and Shapani. 479 days every year. 7% of the planet is water. - DC_Butternut12dCommented"Where am I?" I said as I stood up.
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ahhh I've been waiting for the cringe and here it is. lol
[You are rewarded with a perk: Dual Weilder] - DC_Butternut18dCommented
you forgot the line for the Maiden
"In the name of the Warrior, I charge you to be brave. In the name of the Father, I charge you to be just. In the name of the Mother, I charge you to defend the innocent. Are you willing to keep the oath Aethan Valaryon?" - DC_Butternut18dCommented
Should be Your Grace
"His Royal Highness Prince," greeted the King's Guard with a smile. "I heard about your splendid hunt. Bagging three wild boars is no easy feat." - DC_Butternut18dCommented
should be Lords and Ladies not Ladies and Gentlemen
Aerion, fully aware of Lady Redwyne's intentions, didn't let it affect him. With a smile playing on his lips, he stepped forward, his demeanor radiating grace. "Good morning, Ladies and Gentlemen," he greeted, his gaze steady on Larys. - DC_Butternut18dCommented
Should be "Your Grace" not "Your Highness"
Mrs. Redwyne's features hardened, her gaze shifting to the silver-haired boy whose laughter still hung in the air. "Your Highness," she asked, her voice laced with thinly veiled disdain, "Is this the prince?" The question was rhetorical; Aerion's identity was the worst kept secret in the kingdom. - DC_Butternut18dCommented
Should be Lady not Ms. Missus are for little girls from common folks.
"Ms. Redwyne, Daemon is accountable for his actions. Princess Rhaenyra is more fitting for the role of heir," Allison interjected, coming to Rhaenyra's defense. - DC_Butternut18dCommented
I was barely holding on to this story, and then this shit Asgardian shit came up. what a fucking waste
Bloodline: Ancient Valyrian Dragon King (10%), Asgardian (15%) - DC_Butternut1mthCommented
Leanor's version of sword training
"I am sure Laenor will appreciate your tutelage." Corlys hummed. "He has seldom trained in the ways of combat and would rather choose to spend his time—" - DC_Butternut1mthCommented
Nope they won't. Unless their house is of Valerian Descent. If the man Helaena would marry was not from a Valerian house then he won't receive any dragon.
"That would work for Aegon, but Helaena is a woman, whoever she marries would receive a dragon, which is a dangerous precedent." - DC_Butternut1mthCommented
Up to you, bud. But if you do actually post it can you try to tone it done a little? You know, just enough to avoid making this novel monotone.
Hey everyone, I just wanted to share that I've started releasing one chapter of my novel every day, each ranging between 1,600 and 1,800 words. Additionally, I've introduced R18 content on Patreon for this novel. I'm unsure if I should tone down or completely remove this content from the chapters on Webnovel, as I'm honestly a bit embarrassed to share it here. I'd love to hear your suggestions on this. Thanks! - DC_Butternut1mthCommentedI think it was my other life as a human affecting me, but I could no longer find the females in this world too attractive.
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let the force guide him to become a interstellar mechanic engineer, LOL
Later that night, after forcing himself to eat the grey slop in the cafeteria, Peter returned to his room. The desire to fix his Walkman still lingered, but his lack of technical know-how hindered progress. Instead, he decided to dedicate the evening to meditation, attempting to gain control over the Force within him. - DC_Butternut1mthReplied to Jazpex
its actually 11, since obi-wan was 25 years old in the phantom menace.
[Insert picture of Obi-Wan Kenobi here] - DC_Butternut1mthCommented
that's too much even if he is half celestial. Should have settled between 28k to 35k
"Jedi Master Windu, the younglings midi-chlorian count exceeds 40 thousand." - DC_Butternut2mthCommentedWhen I arrived here two years ago, all I had on me was a wad of cash and a student ID that helpfully provided my new name, Bas Rhys. Eight-years-old, 1998 class of primary four, Cardiff Public School, Wales.
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I really hope, Blair wouldn't be the FMC. That would be sus.
Blair leads Nate into her bedroom and pushes him onto the bed. Nate not expecting this is a bit stunned. - DC_Butternut2mthCommented
God damn!
"That's not true, Mother. I had lots of father figures. I see you've met Detective Beckett and Captain Montgomery." says Castle with a smile looking at Martha.