Lias_Breen
avid reader and shitey writer.
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This is absolutely water trash and I wouldn't recommend anyone to read this. Why? Because I wrote it out of boredom while drinking water from a water cup!!! Enjoy you reader junkies and don't be afraid of giving me the business! I want harsh words about how trash this really is so I can improve my writing.
Hello it's me alias or lias, I will be slowing down the narrative a lot so it's more comfortable for y'all! But in two chapters I will need a name and I want whoever to give one to me!!!! I will be posting roughly 1500 words a day maybe more maybe less. Give me ideas to keep this think tank alive!!! Hope to see some criticisms you read junkies and I'll be posting as regularly as I can!
Hello, I'm an avid reader with a total of 290+ books read in the last year. Overall your writing quality is certainly good but has minor grammar errors one can overlook. Character development is definitely good, a little fast but fun. Update stability I prefer leaving this empty from a professional reader I'm just grateful for it even being released. World background is rock solid and isn't too little or too much. Now for my only gripe minor and I can overlook it. I however must say it and hope for an possible response. Why in kobayashi kyles' name did you allow his friends to watch the events someone had to struggle to get permitted to do in the first place... You know what I'm saying dawg?