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Aithran3yrCommentedHey author, "till their the..", you have yo remove the extra "the."
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Hey author, Spelling error with "ghe" should be "the"
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Ariadne, in Greek mythology, daughter of Pasiphae and the Cretan king Minos. She fell in love with the Athenian hero Theseus and, with a thread or glittering jewels, helped him escape the Labyrinth after he slew the Minotaur, a beast half bull and half man that Minos kept in the Labyrinth. Here the legends diverge: she was abandoned by Theseus and hanged herself; or, Theseus carried her to Naxos and left her there to die, and she was rescued by and married the god Dionysus.
The Abandoned Lover of the Labyrinth. This was the modifier for Ariadne, the lover of Theseus. - Aithran3yrCommentedCh 253 Third World: Terrible Dads
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Here Author, You forgot the word "say" in the first sentence. "Feng Yu was pained hearing his son say such words."
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Hey author, For the sentence, (..He believed belonged to Feng Zi..) Shouldnt the phone belong to Feng Yu? and not Feng Zi here?
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Their battle will be legendary
As you can see, Nu Shen thought she was saying Feng Zi belonged to Zhao Huangzhi first so she practically exploded. "Hmph dream on, he never belonged to you in the first place. You better shut your mouth before I silence you," replied a flushed face Nu Shen. If she didn't strangle the life out of that woman today then she would surely cut her tongue out. - Aithran3yrReplied to DaoistO4sbGe
You're welcome! Happy reading ^^
A body that was over a dozen metres tall and hard skin. Fierce muscles dominated the entire body. The strongest predator of the Mesozoic Era was in front of us. - Aithran3yrCommentedCh 251 Third World: The Wrong Love Rival
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Author what are drunken prawns? Sounds so good!!
Which one would he choose, juicy drunken prawns or handsome Male god? - Aithran3yrCommentedCh 249 Third World: Demoted To A Smart Toilet
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Here Author! it should be, "He would be lying.." instead of "He did be lying.."
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Here Author! "Farewell" , it should be "fare well" Its got to be to be separated, otherwise, it has a completely different meaning.
Wen Qinxi was on pins and needles unable to see the pair of father and son. Judging with Qie Ranzhe's personality, he didn't think the man would fare well with kids thus he followed behind. Unexpectedly, when he reached the cake shop, he was met by a harmonious scene. Feng Xieling was sitting on Qie Ranzhe's lap with his tiny head nestling on his father's shoulder. Qie Ranzhe would occasionally feed Feng Xieling some fudge while answering his questions. - Aithran3yrCommentedCh 247 Third World: Stop Biting My Dad's Lips