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I love the vividness of the book. Author should check grammar typos and that being said,I love the first 10 chapters i read.keep up the work

Aside from a few typos here and there,Author came up with a great setting. Author could give the grammar a little bit of work and it will be good to go. All this said,I think it's gonna be a great story line...keep pushing..good work!

After reading the first 10 chapters, I am impressed. I like the setting of being an immigrant and what it entails..grammar was good keep up the work

Read the first 10 chapters and I must say I am impressed. Keep up the good work

Books looke promising and I love thrillers