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Not that bad, somewhat realistic interactions, which makes it good. You also do a good job of describing the environment, but the thing that I like the most is the fact that he has restrictions on using the system. One criticism is the fact that the relationship between the manager and the MC didn't feel that natural and too pushed. But generally not that boring, 7/10.
"Rub one" lol, first time ever reading something like this in a novel. Nice job author
As of chapter 81, it looks very very good. The only criticism that I can give to the author is that there should be a little bit more explanation of how the important characters look. Right now as much as I know, there is very little description of the MC, other than that, the balance of power, the writing, the world and the logical explanations are very good, would recommend, one of the best novels I have read so far on this app.
Something I forgot to mention that I like the fact that he at least helps the other users. Usually, in those situations, if you have too much, you tend to also help others not just to be kind, but because your own growth will be much faster with companions or vassals. Would love to see the governors do more. So big props there.
The story and the system of leveling up for the MC is very intressting and something new for me at least. But there is no real challenge, I think that if the author made some changes and refined the system to restrict the MC a little, it would have been a top notch novel to read. Another kind of complaint is that, character descriptions are very vague, I literally have no idea how the MC looks like and I have read the whole thing (chapter 121 as of now). Also the Kingdom building side of it, there was kind of none, the MC in my opinion didn't so anything, it just suddenly happened so kind of boring. Lastly the math doesn't math here. How the hell is 50 million people supposed to live in 3000 hectars of land!!?? Like the only possible way I see is if they had skyscrapers. Do basically, had so much potential, but I think that the author just writes it for fun so I don't expect much. Would recommend if you just want to read something without using your brain. Just put your brain somewhere else and read it.
Xi Jingping is watching, be carefull lol.