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While it may have been possible to kill him this way, I think she would have enjoyed being able to kill the bastard 10 times before he stayed dead due to izanami. Though I guess that would have been too loud to go unnoticed .

If you want her to seem like an actual genius, Kakashi is a good timeline to try to match. He was probably walking by 8-9 months, and working on his body physically until about 4 years old. He entered ninja academy at 5. Then he graduated from ninja academy by the time he was 6, became a chunin by 7 and Jonin at 11. At 14, when Minato dies he’s an ANBU captain already, which should be at least elite Jonin level

Kinda OOC to me here. While the kyuubi can be rational and extremely intelligent, he’s also a being of immense hatred. Tsunade should be one of the people he hates the most right now because of her grandfather and a quick talk is all it takes for the kyuubi to make a deal with her?

Where’s Alicia Spinnet in this. I’m guessing you just forgot her name and put Aeliana instead? Or is Aeliana an OC?

The writing could use an edit or two grammar and flow-wise, but it’s definitely readable and better than a lot of stuff on this site. It was quite stable updating until it reached a climax and seems to have been dropped… I like the character except we didn’t get much of her story getting stronger, so her strength feels a bit shallow. The world is One Piece so if you know it, it’s fine, but otherwise, you’d be a bit lost at times. Finally the plot itself is great. Except finally when it reaches what seems like the climax of the arc, it just stopped and was marked as complete. I really hope the author comes back to this. It was a really good story and I want to see what happens next!!!

lol a pig fruit? How’s he going to get any respect from that?

Until now she can still pass off “ki manipulation” as her quirk and each thing she can do is the result of her figuring out different techniques that use ki. If she figures out magic, she’ll have a bit more power, but she’s already OP AF. Why make yourself even more suspicious by “awakening” a second quirk?

lol definitely Midoriya bought that autograph

That’s quite a closed mind for an artisan craftsman

She lived a whole life as a cultivator tho so she still thinks of herself as one. However, she keeps saying these people are mortals, but the comparison with One Piece people and regular mortals is not at all equal and she should really stop expecting mortal capabilities from them. She knows everyone has ridiculous vitality and your will affects the world itself if it’s strong enough. Cultivation isn’t a thing, but you can get ridiculously strong anyways