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Atlas_Dex3yrReplied to Kayden_SRThis is going to be a long project. I am listening to all feedback and will be making changes accordingly when time permits.
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this is my first time writing narratively so I'm sure there are speech improvements im not aware of
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the reason there's no quotes is because I wrote it in a narrative way. Lilith is telling the story
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Earlier when she got off the train Haru gave Vxyen her gamer name. When Vyxen saw a female player with that same name she sent the friend request and included the message Hi Lilith
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glare either.
"Honestly? No. Your mother and you, you're both so welcoming and lovely. But I'm not a Hellcat. None of the others so much as offered me a glance, although none offered me a glare either They weren't welcoming, but they weren't mean or hostile. Well... besides that one male." - Atlas_Dex3yrCommented
she's a muscle head
"That area is hounded by a special variant of wolf beasts. Their king is Tyber, a Glacial War Wolf. For the most part, we remain neutral. They don't mess with us, we don't mess with them. Boundaries are not a part of this forest, we only respect each other's dens. Tyber isn't nice by any means, so please do not attract his attention if at all possible. His youngest is more open to friendships with us, however. She's a sweet wolf, but she a muscle head. She will crush her foe before she speaks to them, if they enrage her. Fufu." - Atlas_Dex3yrCommented
monsters
"Mother told me that woman was the reason her core got a massive jump-start! I wish I could find someone that could help me grow stronger. I've even heard of certain beast type monster going through evolutions to grow more massive or powerful. Wouldn't that be amazing?" - Atlas_Dex3yrCommented
there is an extra 'to'
Mina slowly opened her eyes, realizing she was snuggled between Inferna and her daughter. Their warm fur and soft snoring made her almost want to to curl up and sleep longer.