Your writing is formidable, it just fascinates the mind how good writing some people like yourself can do. I can see a very bright future ahead for you.

The use of vocabulary is just formidable!!! Wow keep it up !! I am very very impressed, good job. I hope to read more stories from you, you have the potential to become a very good author one day. Your character development is also very intriguing and I just love the use of powerful imagery to set the scene, I wish you all the best for your future endeavours

Wow

Lovely

Nice