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Bruh, almost every time I look at your comments, I think we have the exact same thought process 😂👍
LIKE I SAID, BRO IS F***ING "IMMUNE" TO ALL CURSES AND POISONS
This whole part right here is bulls**t. Like bro doesn't have just higher curse resistance, he is IMMMUNE to all curses and poisons. It came with his class
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Nah, if you had a semblance of intelligence, then you'd think it was worth studying rather than just immediately deciding he's trash. Like what if is superpower is to absorb things, and that's why the mana couldn't react, bc it was absorbed? Or other different possibilities, not just immediately "He's trash"
And 2 paragraphs later I see the clarification
I thought we couldn't finish the OS at the house and were waiting for the server farm for the whole thing?
And his bed
Honestly, our MC be weak af compared to Rin rn, and he still gets to take the spotlight for a lot of things somehow
Is this supposed to be +30 to all stats? Otherwise your stat calculations in parentheses don't make sense to me. Unless I'm forgetting something
So I'm confused, did he get two skills before and only learn one for whatever reason, or is this supposed to be just the one skill he got from the one treasure chest. Also, if he didn't learn it, why and what'd he do with it? Not tryna be snarky or anything, just genuinely confused
That's 5 points, he only leveled up 4 times. Also, the Defense should be at 2 since previously it said he used the points from, I think levels 7-10, to distribute evenly across Defense, Stamina, and Charm
Oh, I see, my apologies and thanks for the response
Emily? Thought her name was Maelis? Which one we using then?
Would've been a perfect quote, should've said "While the 'motion of the ocean' is important, the girls gotta actually be able to get on the 'boat' first" though. Sounds way better, to me at least
I think he mentioned earlier in the story that for the buff, you had to plant the flag in the ground. Instead, since it's unbreakable, he uses it as a weapon
Honestly, this story do be kinda mid, as in it's not especially outstanding or anything of the like. However, I wouldn't say that it's trash or even all that bad. There are several screw ups on grammar here and there, but I don't personally feel like it's all that terrible. The world building in terms of explaining why things are the way they are definitely could've been improved upon. The story is slow in some places. MC is kind of an idiot in using the system efficiently, but I still think it's a decent story overall. Also, when there's sections where the words are stuck together, I'm not quite sure of the reason for it. Because if you find a section that they're stuck together on and pull up the paragraph comments for that section, they're not stuck together in the header. Just thought I'd throw that out there cuz there's a bunch of people who had complained about it.
I get that he cares about her and all, but isn't it a bit too much? Like you're fighting for your life here and all you can think about is your sister? *doubt*