Review Detail of Niceee9842 in Shadow Hack

Honestly, this story do be kinda mid, as in it's not especially outstanding or anything of the like. However, I wouldn't say that it's trash or even all that bad. There are several screw ups on grammar here and there, but I don't personally feel like it's all that terrible. The world building in terms of explaining why things are the way they are definitely could've been improved upon. The story is slow in some places. MC is kind of an idiot in using the system efficiently, but I still think it's a decent story overall. Also, when there's sections where the words are stuck together, I'm not quite sure of the reason for it. Because if you find a section that they're stuck together on and pull up the paragraph comments for that section, they're not stuck together in the header. Just thought I'd throw that out there cuz there's a bunch of people who had complained about it.