Willem_Trialmont

*on* retainer

Did you forget about 12 Angry Men?

Kind of shitting on your story's premise here.

Does he spend all his time sniffing rooms and waxing poetic about them?

Aggressively Chinese.​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​

All of your supporting characters are starting to sound the same, and you're overusing grand-scale metaphors.

Do they sell footballs in stationery stores?