really nice story line. Your characters are lovable. I just started this story to see if I would like it and I do. excited to read more of it.

Could use some editing and maybe a few word changes here and their. You have a good story line and interesting characters. Excited for updates.

Love this fantasy expect of your story. Could you just a tad of editing here and their. Honestly one of the best short storys iv read on here yet. Keep updating please.

I really like how you describe things ♥