Sailors_Den

Its all g.. I actually fixed that part to make it clearer to the readers giving information to how the AI was created... Yeah man I love reading or writing because it just relaxes me, away from things that bother me.. Its a way to relax and go into an adventure

I see what you say makes sense, now.. It seems we got to break that rule a little because then the readers can understand the average IQ in that planet is 180IQ (which I know it will be 100)... Instead of saying that the average IQ is one 100 in that planet because they are all 180 IQ's.. It will be confusing if it was put that way

By the words of gods as it matches the level of the MC character then no.. But if you mean deities or Sovereigns who rule part's of the cosmos and other planes that I plan to add.. Then yes.

I apologize but this book will be stopped for a few days because of life reasons... I will came back on it and start updating soon

I will fix that

You commented on my deleted chapter.. It was unfinished and I accidentally uploaded. If you read it, it had a much more light feeling to it. If you have any feedback of the beginning of that new chapter, then that would be great, after all it was unfinished.

For all does reading.. There will be various side characters.. One of them will be a villain that wants destruction domination... There will be various side characters who spice up the universe.. The god mc he is more like a watcher who makes things interesting, he is a MC but there will be others who are very important in the story.. The story will have anti heroes, heroes , as side characters who are crucial.. They will grow through the universe as the god of that universe makes things more interesting

Awesome... So make things a little more vague and show it with the action instead of wordings. Or else it will make it robotic.. I will fix that

I will try to make it simpler and more to the point... Thank you for the feedbacl

The main character won't change into a human mind set, he is like a reader a viewer of show as he unravels what happens. He is a neutral entity that watches the universe unfold. He won't be humanized. He will just experiment with the universe to understand it. Like a studying a disease. I know my biggest problem is clarity and grammar because I am second language, which doesn't let my imagination be as clear. Difficult to understand which parts, I will love if you told me what parts needs clearing up... Imagination points? That will be fixed. AI? That will be easily fixed because people already told me about that and I know how to fix that because I already though of it. Thank you for the real feedback, if you could tell me what needs clearing, then that will be big merit.