Camden_D_DelGallo

I myself write stories, and have some experance with non-humans. First, there is a key diffrence between alwase non human, and became non human. The latter in your case. For humans that became non-human. There will alwase be a dissonance, the transformation scean. Lets say, your charictor wakes up as a fox. They will remember, and have memories framed like human senses. There entire life they had 2 legs, no tail, 2 arms, a human head, a mouth shaped like X, and ears Y senstive. Now... they are not that way. They will feel wrong, confused, scared. For a fox, this means they will notice with hyper-sensitivity(becuase its brand new to them), the fur, the legs, the way the joints move. To imagine this yourself, i use a trick where you move your own body map. Imagine your legs are bent diffrently, arms are facing down, are shorter, your hands are paws, feet are digigrad, and your spine extends into a tail. Your mouth notices, your toung moves around a muzzle with sharp teeth, that is far larger then before. Your eyes see a muzzle right there, it will forever be a permenet ficture in there view, reminding them every second they are not human. Then the feelings of the body. The ears that twist, and move with mechanical realism, and sensation that is very, very sensitive. Senses are a weird thing. Some areas of a fox body simply are more sensitive, the same way your hands are more senstive then arm skin. That is why petting feels good. To a animal, petting feels like a person reaching for you emotionally, telling you are ok, and giving you a warm, full body hug. Smell is a layer of things, layer of sents that tells you where someone has been, and who they are. It becomes just as important as sight, and sound to a fox. Sound is another thing. Rotating ears means attention flicks around anxiously. You want to ear X, rotate too it. Suddenly its more detailed. Everything is more detailed, so much more detailed. Too such a point its not loud, its higher quality. Going from 360p to 1028p. Except 360p is human senses. They will feel, and sense layers, and layers of specifics in a sound. They can even use it to feel a space, and where they are, and where something is. A canine tracks by keeping its nose low, and smelling, and then moving there nose around, tracking air movement, and then following where they think the sent goes. They can not tell forword, from backwords motion in a sent, except thru footprints. Then there is the body map. Every second at first will be... raw. very raw. they will have no filters. No coping, nothing. There first seconds would be like if you gained ADHD, turned up to 50x, unable to filter, and they will likely have a panic attack from raw sensory input. Eventually, they will calm, as there mind adapts, and finds it... not overwhelming, still raw, just... new. As there brain accepts this level of sensory imput is stuck. That this body, tail, all these weird new mussles, and shape of body, is stuck. Expect phantom limbs, trying to move a leg like a arm. Trying to speak, and failing, as your mouth does not move right. Falling over, a few times. Walking like a new-born pup. Becuase effectively you are. It should be noted that the lower eye sight is a big deal. Try crouching to the ground... imagine that at the hight of a fox... that is there new perspective... for ever. Make them confused why humans are giants. Frustrated at round door nobs. Angry. Annoyed at the fact no one understands them. Immensely... happy... when someone does. Make them feel lonely, stuck, alone, afrad... because thats what would occur in any person. All humans have socal needs. Eventually, they will adapt. but every so often, they will pay deep attention to there body. It will be slow. They will need to rebuild everything. There will be joy in realizing 'oh... wow! I can smell that!', and hatrad 'fuck! I can't open a door! NO!'. Anyway, that's some basics.

Completely wrong on how autism works. too such a degree its insulting. Coming from a autistic, absolutely unwilling to read this.

this is the best adaptation of minecraft's physics and lore I've seen. great worldbuilding. I hope to see more of this as the story just sucks you in. Would love to see more of the enderman.

wow, amazing, Please dont drop! There is too few SCP novels. I love the concept, and would love seeing the conflict the scp foundation will have as it grows! As well as how he deals with this mess of a universe.

I agree with all you said in these 3 chapters. Some may not like the way you do things, but I like it. I like bringing RL issues into fiction. It happens anyway, but your story shows what would be moral to do. I love your story, keep the work up!

magic is just science we dont understand, if it exists, then logic can be applied, if logic can be applied, then it is something that can be studied with science.

lovely story, keep going. Im sure it will get more popular as time goes on. The world and setting is realistic, the tec is accurate, and the speed is very accurate. I love it! Cant wait for more! I've been dreaming of a story like this for ages!

i love this. amazing story, im very curious about why they are selling so many pods and why people will die. the only complaint i have is MORE CHAPTERS IM ADDICTED!!!. :)

this is a basic a what if story. "what if someone on earth(specifically a nerd) bacame a god" the answer is this. it has a wonderful multiverse, a ok main character. in my opinion we need more character development. and a interesting story. overall very good and interesting work.

you do know that any # x1 is the same #, 5 x 1 = 5