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DaoistIa3l2i

DaoistIa3l2i

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    DaoistIa3l2i4 years ago
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    The first chapter is pretty short but a conflict was established pretty quickly which is good and all but We need a clear reasoning as To why this is happening. The way thE book is written is top quality in my oPinion and has tons of potential.

  • DaoistIa3l2i
    DaoistIa3l2i4 years ago
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    This novel has potential, The author clearly knows where hes going With this novel and hopefully he continues in this direction. although it is early in the story i recommend you GIve us a brief description as to what the characters look like