thanks for an extra long chapter, looking forward to the next one!

wonder what'll happen to Cra! with Ken's lightning magic, it'll be dangerous to keep fighting him. love the way you revealed Ken's full strength and im looking forward to the next part of this fight!

i also agree, the introduction of magic into the world is cool, where everyone can manipulate magic and some are incredibly skilled like ken!

rip cra the crusher

i also agree with what youre saying g

I agree

Ken's mum seems cool. also looking forward to Ken's adventure, I'm sure it'll be exciting!

The story is great, the characters, the vast world and story development is very well thought and is implemented into the chapters very well. The one con though is the punctuation and occasionally, the grammar. Sometimes it's hard to tell if Ken's thinking or having a flashback. Overall, the story is great and entertaining, and it always makes me want to read on more at the end of every chapter. It's just the small errors in writing that needs improving. Other than that, I want to find out what Ken does next and I'm looking forward to what ManjD has in store for Kenzai!

What a paragraph! It ended with a cliff-hanger and I really want to know what happens next! Wonder who the voice could be. The chapter also showed off Ken's ability to fight and I hope he'll fight even more enemies in the upcoming chapters.

excellent chapter, it's also interesting how mana can be used to charge swords, making my g ken stronger (also what are powerstones?)

enjoyable chapter, man like ken

very good chapter, i love the way you introduced magic into kens world and im looking forward to see what he can do with it!

fantastic

Fabulous chapter, with the new introduction of Zelios, I'm quite excited what type of person he's going to be like and how important he's gonna be in the book. Keep it up, I'd love to see what happens next to Ken!

The first few chapters are spectacular, descriptions of the protagonist, where he comes from and how he's going to be like later in the novel. Overall it's great, however it lacks some details about the other characters. Ken's mother should be more looked at since she's the first character other than Ken and probably the closest person to him. It's great though, looking forward to seeing what Ken does next!

yh I agree yh