Timothy_Hogan
I'm just trying my feet at writing my own story, and using what I learn. I'm trying to make my mark and tell the story that's in my mind.
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Man Author. This was my first time reading a military book and I'm digging it. The first chapter is long; however that works for the set up and what you are trying to establish. Also the setting was really good, and I felt as if I could imagine the whole situation playing out. Outside of a few grammar errors or so, this story is really good. I recommend anyone that love stories like these to check it out. Author I wish you the best of luck, and you continue to do such amazing things with this story.
The story was good. The main character is interesting, and the plot is like a breath of fresh air. I would recommend everyone check out this story.