Timothy_Hogan

Man. Author this story is really good. I love your attention to detail and how you portray each character. I hope you keep going, and never stop.

I like what you're doing author. The flow of the story is amazing and the plot is really enticing. I look forward to seeing what else you accomplish and I hope you never stop!

Man Author. This was my first time reading a military book and I'm digging it. The first chapter is long; however that works for the set up and what you are trying to establish. Also the setting was really good, and I felt as if I could imagine the whole situation playing out. Outside of a few grammar errors or so, this story is really good. I recommend anyone that love stories like these to check it out. Author I wish you the best of luck, and you continue to do such amazing things with this story.

From what I'm reading, it's really good. The pacing is nice and smooth. The conflict the main character is in is very interesting. I really like what you are writing and I hope you continue to do great things.

The story was good. The main character is interesting, and the plot is like a breath of fresh air. I would recommend everyone check out this story.

So far, I am interested to see where this goes. ( Sorry about that was trying to delete the second comment or mine😅)

Sure. I don't mind at all.

Hey Bro. Thank you. That means a lot. Trust me we are only beginning.