Writing Quality: Not bad but can be better (3) Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3) Plot Development: i cant say much bc only 8ch. but i dont understand nothing i think you need to add more text to pre-story or make lore deeper (3) Character Design: not bad but i cant inmaginate yourself ah MC (3) Prehistory of the World: sorry for repeat but you need more lore to understand what world it is (3) Verdict: not bad? but need a lot of work. I didn’t like it yet, I just can’t feel myself in the place of the MC, or at least cheer for it. I don't think I will follow it. but! I can wish the author inspiration and a light hand.

Writing Quality: Terrible (1) Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3) Plot Development: Yes...just no (1) Character Design: China (2) Prehistory of the World: China (1) Verdict: A piece of China nonsense. I do not advise.

Writing Quality: Translate (3) Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3) Plot Development: Yes...just no (1) Character Design: China (2) Prehistory of the World: Cultivation (1) Verdict: A piece of cultivator's nonsense. I do not advise.

Writing Quality: Terrible (1) Stability of updates: let there be confusion (3) Plot Development: Yes...just no (1) Character Design: China (2) Prehistory of the World: Modern Cultivation (1) Verdict: A piece of cultivator's nonsense, in the modern world, which lowers its significance even more. I do not advise.

I don’t know what to say, but the fact that the “majority” of the readers of this “work of a genius of thought” is about, as I understand it, the stupid MC who shifts everything to the system and how (someone) reduces cheekbones from stupidity (rage). After reading these comments, I realized that this is not worth my time. but I don't understand one person comment was "honestly one of the greatest things I've read, all the characters are good with a decent personality and girls don't fall in love with the MC right away. The MC himself is very funny and smart which is a pleasure to read" WHAT a PANCAKE? he’s such a stump, what then is your intellect if he is smart for you?

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I was lured by the name, as I am interested in the disclosure of such a character as Hella, the Firstborn of Odin. and how the author can reveal it, but when I read the abstract and realized that it would be a fucking Chinese! given that most of the Chinese are terrible patriots, which is not surprising, and when one of these Chinese gets somewhere, everything is gone. "I'm a proud Chinese! You're all shit! Death to the Americans!" and the like, maybe I misunderstood, but referring to the previous speakers, everything slides down to the fact that the author perverts / distorts the entire Marvell universe, and turns it into xiangxia (stupid (mostly) cultivation worlds where everyone in the world is a miserable dog and wants to bite his throat to another (which is the opposite of my "help everyone" creed) + harem + flat plot) I don't want to offend the author (are you Chinese or not) but the idea, the idea itself! good and interesting, but the implementation is below my dignity. I can only wish you good luck and all the best.

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счастье! счастье! счастье! (здесь должен был быть мем о тренировке "Берсерка" с мечём)

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