dragondon89

ok I'm confused. is riha kotoha?

please try to make the names consistent

This fanfiction seems promising as of chapter 5. I am looking forward to how this story unfolds in the future. Keep up the good work.

thank you for the chapter!

thx for chapter

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The story is pretty good so far. It has some grammar issues and some fast pacing. But I like the concept.

The speed here for a slash is a little confusing